Score: 8

"just FYI"

submission: Dungeons&Dragons- trailer

date: June 26, 2008

the concept is actually from TSR, unless you're basing it off of 4E [which you couldn't have been in 2006 x3]

looks promising :3 can't wait to watch it!

Score: 9

"good job, needs work"

submission: Fwoopy!

date: January 30, 2008

very nice :3 but I, for one, am not a fan of the computer generated voices.. they distract from the fun ;.; I prefer word bubbles, personally. but the main thing was the colored boxes ^-^; take those out, and it's an awesome vid :D

Score: 2

"hmmm... could've been better..."

submission: Mech.Sonic Vs Mech Shadow

date: January 5, 2008

it's nto bad, but like Marluxia said, the firhsting sounds are looped far too many times, and they're too loud, the music is drowned out. also, you should look into animating your beams better, the 'kamehameha' styled beam looks really bad D:

uncreative virctories as well, they would've been more appealing if they were done better.

a few tips: shake the screen when heavy hits are done, or when a character is smashed into the groudn

the backgrounds were TOTALLY randome, you should link them togethe rsomehow, so it doesn't look like you just raided a backgroudns gallery.

and give it a better story, or something, y'know?

being a test doesn't excuse uncreativity ;.;

Score: 8

"awesome :D I want more.. but less of that beeping"

submission: Wrath of shadow Ep. 1

date: January 5, 2008

AWESOME you obviously have flash skill :D but I'd advise you to ditch that horrid beeping noise @.@ when tehy talk, you know, and get a few more sound effects, to liven it up..

I want more :D

Score: 6

"much better :D"

submission: Sonic Anniversary Tribute

date: January 5, 2008

a great step up from teh last shadow's story movie I watched, you're improving :3 I hjave but 3 complaints.

1: shadow's shoes aren't properly done ^-^; I'd advise searching on google, and gettign an accurate reference of them

2. When sonic is running, it'd look better if you put the blue 'after image' on a layer undearneath him, rather than on top of him, otherwise, it looks great!

3. the 'flip' turning effect kindof bothers me, when he's on the ex. gear :3

other than that, this is pretty awesome :D

Score: 2

"I appologize, but... horrid ;.;"

submission: Shadow's Story Pt. 2

date: January 5, 2008

very nice attempt, but sadly, this just doesn't quite do it. you shoudl remake these, and don't make such short movies, it's rather.. infuriating to watch something so short, afte rletting it load for so long.

at least combine the first, second and 3rd into one movie, and more appropriate music would also benefit. I do like teh songs, but the song from fighting the bio-lizard in SA:2 wasn't quite appropriate. try something more like the 'tragic' music, I dunno what it's called.

as for this one, I enjoyed it, but it looks like you got a bit lazy on morph, witht eh whole ball-for-hands thing. I coudl be wrong, perhaps you intended for him to be like that, but I'd suggest you take a bit more time to sketch otu your character designs, it'll improve everything in the furutre. also, for when you get into everything else, making sketches of the area, backdrop and such, and a storyboard of waht's going to happen, will help in the long shot.

I probobly sound like a total jerk, but I'm planning on going into animation as a career, so I've done my research

Cant' wait to see hwo number 3 is :3 and I hope my advice helps

Score: 10

"HAHAA! I've found you!"

submission: De la Terre a la Lune

date: August 18, 2006

didn't know ou were on newgrounds, cerb, but it's nice to see this animated ^-^

Score: 0

"I'm doing this out of love ;.;"

submission: Kanzeni Marin Nitsuite

date: February 18, 2006

as per your horrible request, I shall blam this cartoon, but it's still good ^-^

Score: 10

"OMFG I can't beleive that!"

submission: Arfenhouse Teh Movie 3

date: January 29, 2006

any movie that can make me waste 5 minutes of my life watching credits deserves all 10s

Score: 9

"HA I GAVE YOU A NEIN!"

submission: Operation O

date: October 31, 2005

seriously tho, it's a great gae, but for some reason the G key doesn't work for me, so I kept dying at the first boss X.X