Score: 8

"just FYI"

submission: Dungeons&Dragons- trailer

date: June 26, 2008

the concept is actually from TSR, unless you're basing it off of 4E [which you couldn't have been in 2006 x3]

looks promising :3 can't wait to watch it!

Score: 9

"good job, needs work"

submission: Fwoopy!

date: January 30, 2008

very nice :3 but I, for one, am not a fan of the computer generated voices.. they distract from the fun ;.; I prefer word bubbles, personally. but the main thing was the colored boxes ^-^; take those out, and it's an awesome vid :D

Score: 2

"hmmm... could've been better..."

submission: Mech.Sonic Vs Mech Shadow

date: January 5, 2008

it's nto bad, but like Marluxia said, the firhsting sounds are looped far too many times, and they're too loud, the music is drowned out. also, you should look into animating your beams better, the 'kamehameha' styled beam looks really bad D:

uncreative virctories as well, they would've been more appealing if they were done better.

a few tips: shake the screen when heavy hits are done, or when a character is smashed into the groudn

the backgrounds were TOTALLY randome, you should link them togethe rsomehow, so it doesn't look like you just raided a backgroudns gallery.

and give it a better story, or something, y'know?

being a test doesn't excuse uncreativity ;.;